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| DeacBlue | 2009-10-16 | id # 8407 | |
| These reviews should be easy for me, as there are always the same problems with your fics, and you never actually try to get better. So, that being said, here's the (utterly predictable) review. Find a beta that can help you with the spelling and grammar problems that you have from not having English as a first language. Quit staging every fic you have around the Israeli armed forces. Every fic that you do somehow comes out as a paen to the Israeli armed forces. It got old several fics ago. Buffy was involved with military for only two arcs - one in the show, one in the comics. And if she were involved, as an American, she'd more likely be involved with the American military. Try, just as a lark, writing a fic in which the Scoobies are neither in the Israeli military, nor do they through some amazing coincidence meet up with a superperson from the IDF or Mossad, or any Israeli. Se if you can extend your creative range from A to B. Give it a shot, okay? |
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| kaza | 2009-10-19 | id # 8409 | |
| I think this is turing out real well. Keep up the good work, and keep posting! | |||
| Anon | Nightwing510@yahoo.com | 2009-11-06 | id # 8418 |
| I liked the way you have added the suprise about humans & Visitors being genetically releated. | |||
| Nightwing510 | 2009-11-11 | id # 8421 | |
| I liked the way you have Willow sabatoging the factory. And the way she is helping the humans escape. | |||
| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2009-12-24 | id # 8442 |
| Um there isn't room for 200 trillion, I'm assuming you mean trillion, and why would we let aliens from another planet move in and take the land? We'd be the minority on our our planet, I love most of your fic, but not everyone is in love with Israel. |
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| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2010-05-07 | id # 8509 |
| Shower scene! | |||