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| Anon | 2009-07-16 | id # 8306 | |
| I liked the way you had to guess who Willow's lover is. Please update soon. | |||
| Anon | 2009-07-16 | id # 8307 | |
| I liked the way you had to guess who Willow's lover is. Please update soon. | |||
| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2009-07-16 | id # 8308 |
| WHOA! NICE ONE!!! More please. | |||
| Cuprit | 2009-07-16 | id # 8309 | |
| Seems like the beginning of a awesome story. Good Job. |
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| DeacBlue | deacblue@hotmail.com | 2009-07-16 | id # 8310 |
| I like the construction of it, the pacing isn't bad at all. How you treat Buffy vs. the Slayer is a coin flip - different authors have chosen different ways to presnt them, when they separate them at all. The only problems - and I'd almost hesitate to call them that - would be with the characterizations of Buffy, the Slayer, and Willow. The issue with Buffy and the Slayer is that, any time they've been presented as separate entities, they have always been presented as having the same goals, however much their perspectives and means to achieve those goals may have differed. What you've written so far indicates a divergennce in goals, though there is still room to write around that. The issue with Willow is far more serious. You have Willow, for the sake of sensual enjoyment, willing to give up her only female friend and hero, konwing that if she loses one, she'll lose the other. All of this without fighting for her. This isn't close to Willow as a character. This issue needs to be addressed. Still, all in all, not a bad effort so far. I look forward to seeing where you take it. |
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| Chosenone | sfedorczuk@yahoo.com | 2009-07-16 | id # 8311 |
| My goddess I love it! Please dont stop writting it. Wow now I want my own Slayer! | |||
| Rin | 2009-07-17 | id # 8312 | |
| Interesting... | |||
| pmcc | 2009-07-19 | id # 8314 | |
| :pout: Don't leave it there! We want more. Soon? |
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| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2009-08-03 | id # 8330 |
| Don't be stupid,Buffy share Willow. | |||
| Rin | 2009-08-03 | id # 8331 | |
| You have Buffy's ego down almost perfectly, which is definitely a must in this type of storytelling. Kudos! Look forward to the rest of the story! | |||
| Cuprit | 2009-08-03 | id # 8332 | |
| Wow, that was a awesome update. Can't wait for the big talk. Good Job. |
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| Rin | 2009-09-23 | id # 8390 | |
| So...the ritual combines the two? That's interesting, though I'm a little confused at what she decided... Eh, mythology always confuses me when I'm tired. When you update again (which I hope is very soon), I hope to be in a better mindset, so that I'll understand better. | |||
| wiffyscoob | 2009-09-23 | id # 8391 | |
| Hey Rin, I added a little bit, and hope I made it more clear that she has chosen to do the ritual. I thought I'd made it clear, but I guess I left it too vague! But, yeah, Wills gets both Buff and the Slayer. ;) | |||
| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2009-09-24 | id # 8392 |
| Angel, that guy was the biggest part of the problem, he may have control now but the situation with Buffy shows that he's Angelus under the facade, mess up some young girls mind, yeah that's him. |
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| Shadowcub | lesiaf@bellsouth.net | 2010-01-30 | id # 8462 |
| This worries me, this constant whining over a man who is nothing more than a memory, if Buffy had met Angel when he was alive, he more than likely would have knocked her up and high tailed it out of town. Kissing a corpse for God's sake no wonder Willow wont talk to her. He was nothing more than a pedophile, a stalker, he's not so different from Angelus. The fact she ran straight to him now is a big red stop sign to me, I don't care if its goodbye, a phone call would've done as well. If I were Willow, I'd still hold out for the Slayer. |
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| wraith | 2010-02-22 | id # 8477 | |
| That...was wonderful!!! | |||